I'm no poet, that's certain. But every now and then, inspiration strikes, the Muse sings, and I'll pen something in the moment. I wrote the following poem for JB on the flight between Chicago and Dallas on my way home from Notre Dame (more about that soon).
But, before you read the poem, you should watch Billy Collins read his love poem, "Litany," because it is, I think, a terrific take on the traditional love poem.
And now that you're smiling, you can read the poem for JB.
"The Visitors"
opened the blinds
and saw the birds.
I was amazed.
Cardinals sang;
blue jays flapped;
and on the porch
a barn swallow
had built its nest
in the corner
of the awning.
I found pleasure
in watching them.
My friends made fun,
calling me old
and their Paw Paw.
Still, I hung my
red and yellow
hummingbird glass—
much like the one
my grandfather
hung when I was
just a young boy—
and the green seed
feeder from the
small hardware store
on Washington.
You smiled at my
surprising new
care for winged
friends in our slant
cherry laurel.
But you never
spoke sarcastic
words you may have
been holding in.
Instead you took
care in helping
stir the nectar
and pour the seed.
Even now, you call
me to the blinds
when visitors perch.
Comfort and love
are often taught
in support groups
with folding chairs
and from pulpits.
Yet they rarely
are performed.
You embody
those elusive
words with an ease
and a rare grace.
To have one that
loves and to be
completely had
is surely a
picture of those
who become one
flesh in their God.

2 comments:
Thanks for sharing both of those. Mr. Collins is an excellent poet. Mostly I like to listen to him read. weird.
Your poem was good too, although it may be two.. one ended at perch I think..
Have a great week, senor.
Interesting post... I can see that you put a lot of hard work on your blog. I'm sure I'd visit here more often. George from love poem.
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